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Minggu, 13 Maret 2011




Actually I was born in Padang 17 years ago but my mother come from Bukittinggi. Automatically my hometown is Bukittinggi, exactly in Sungai pua. Sungai pua is around 7 km from the Bukittinggi city. It takes 15 minutes to go there from Bukittinggi. From Padang it takes 2 hours by using a bus. It is around 90 km.
The weather is very nice which is cold and fresh in the morning. In the noon the weather is not as hot as Padang in the noon. The weather is hot enough but it will not burn your skin just like in Padang. If the weather will be very cold on the night, you will need to wear a jacket if you want to go outside in the night.
There are so many beautiful views you can see in Sungai Pua. First is Mount Singgalang. You can see Mount Singgalang clearly from my house. The best time to see the mount Singgalang is on the morning, because the mount still half covered by the fog. That is the most beautiful view I have ever seen. Next is the rice field behind my house. The rice field is very clean. I often take a picture in there. And there is a large and clean river beside the river. You will not find the view like this in Padang.
So, if you want to have to unforgettable moment with the most beautiful view in west Sumatra, sungai pua is the best place.

11 komentar:

  1. it is a good essay..
    but I think you have to add more idea..
    you can describe more about your village..
    not just weather and views, but anything in your hometown...

    BalasHapus
  2. thank you...
    i will try to add more idea and developing my essay...
    n_n

    BalasHapus
  3. "And there is a large and clean river beside the river"

    Don't use conjuction in the first sentence.


    Be careful to use capital letter. I think you do not use capital letter in some names of place, for example Sungai Pua.

    I think that's all from me,.

    :)

    BalasHapus
  4. according to me..
    your essay is good so far,,

    keep write to be better..^_^

    BalasHapus
  5. so far your essay is good enough,,
    because you have told about more information about that place,,

    but,,
    it better to you to tell about another tourism object in your hometown,,
    1 place not enough,,
    heee

    that's from me,,
    :)

    BalasHapus
  6. "my mother come from Bukittinggi".(paragraph1 line1)
    I think you have to add "s" after "come".
    "mount Singgalang"(paragraph3 line4)
    pay attention to the capital word, I think it's "Mount Singgalang"
    at all this is good essay with good idea...
    because it has corrected with mr.saunir...
    keep try to do the best...

    BalasHapus
  7. think you have short essay..
    write it more..

    BalasHapus
  8. you can add more pictures to make your essay to be more interesting...

    that is all..
    hehehe
    ^_^

    BalasHapus
  9. ehem...

    your writing is good enough...

    i just see one mistake. you put conjunction to start the sentence.(paragraph 3rd line 8th)

    BalasHapus
  10. your essay is very good,
    this is the best essay i ever read...
    you are really amazing....

    BalasHapus
  11. aw,
    I think you're essay is too short .
    You can explore again .

    OK,
    I think that's all from me .
    It's clear everybody :p

    BalasHapus