Writing 1 AWLIA FADHLI
My Idol 17387
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LADY GAGA
Stefani Joanne Angelina Germanotta Was born on March 28, 1986 in New York. Lady Gaga as her stage name, is an American pop singer who is very beautiful. She has blue eyes, long blond hair, and has a good shape. She is around 172 cm height and 56 km weight.
Lady Gaga is the eldest child of the Italian American Joseph Germanotta, an enterpreneour and Cynthianee Bissett J. She has already know or had been introduced to an instrumental music since she was four. She began performing at performing at open milk nights at 14. She leads a roles as adelaida when she act at high school play. At the age of 17, lady gaga go to the New York University, Majoring in art. There she studied music and improved her skill in music.
The first time gaga signed the contract is the contract with Def jam recordings at the age of 19. She was introduced with akon there. Akon is a hip-hop American singer who is already famous before. Gaga is very lucky get a rare chance that can introduced to Akon. Akon has a good interpretation to gaga, akon think that gaga has a bright future in American music. Akon is right, after gaga released her debut pop album, gaga really make people dazzle with her album. Her album is totally booming. The album reached the number one of the record chart of six countries and it is become the world top album in billboard.
Gaga’s first album is titled as “the monster”. The album was launch in 2008. Gaga choosed “bad romance” as her first song to launched. Gaga choose the right song “bad romance” is totally success in American music. It was get many award such as grammy award, mtv music award, American music award, and global award. The album reached the best seller in America and the single bad romance also reached the most top single mp3. The album has been sold until 10 million copies. Bad romance is the best song I ever heard. I always sing it and listen it all the time.
That is why Lady Gaga become my idol. She is my inspiration in music. Therefore Gaga’s become my favorite list in my phone. Based on the description above I hope the reader also become the fans of Lady gaga, because you will never regret become the fans of Lady gaga.
"her stage name, is an American pop" singer(paragraph 1 line 2)
BalasHapusI think coma is not necessary there...
"lady gaga go to" (paragraph 2 line 5)
I think because it's past tense you have to use verb2...
and why don't you make some of your sentences become complex to make it interesting..
Tq
hay aw...
BalasHapusyour essay is good enough..
but it will better for you if you add some picture again.
thank you awlia..